Since it seems like the author wanted a "finale cliffhanger", it's optional to add a lampshade on Rai's Brother as a finale cliffhanger, preferably from Getjutel seeing as he's the only previous-generation Noble left to know what happened.Īs much as I agree that this final arc was bad, I do have to say that the Nuke idea wasn't bad per se (it was only bad because we had to deal with numerous Satellites already as human weapons). Rai has historically tanked hits to prevent collateral damage, so it's thematically fitting that Rai dies by protecting instead of attacking. Author solemnly swears that she has no idea what will happen next in this story.he will be kinda mean but will warm up i promise.all the ghoul info came from youtube dont blame me.Cadis Etrama Di Raizel & Frankenstein (Noblesse).Cadis Etrama di Raizel/Frankenstein (Noblesse). Language: English Words: 83,768 Chapters: 25/? Collections: 1 Comments: 316 Kudos: 504 Bookmarks: 53 Hits: 9457įor ChaosSexual Fandoms: Noblesse (Manhwa) It only takes five bored teenagers, couple of candles and an Ouija board to open a door, which should have been left closed.
He took a deep breath, expanding his already very large and voluminous chest cavity (inhabited by his tiddies) and punched Taonkey hard in the stomach.
"Ya lil shite, GET THE FECK OIT ME SWAMP!" The force threw the donkey mushroom creature into a tree. "Now then, traitor, care to tell why you've brought this information to me?" Well….much sooner than you thought he was going to, anyway." "Who would want to own a swamp? Nature belongs to us all." Language: English Words: 2,349 Chapters: 2/? Comments: 13 Kudos: 8 Hits: 72 "Your swamp?" A fairy asked as they fluttered past. And what's more, Frankenstein, care to realise you addressed me glaringly wrong? I'm not one of your Master's traitors." "Simply, I've come to warn you of his death in advance. The 820 years spent parted takes its toll on Raizel and Frankenstein. This fic gave me an opportunity to look back on what I need to work on as a writer, and I will certainly do that.
#FRANKENSTEIN AND LUNARK SHIP SERIES#
I happen to be working on a separate series (which has nothing to do with Noblesse) on a Korean website, and I’m having trouble with it due to the loose contents. Not to mention the story got kind of loose and lost its tempo over time. I remember how with chapter 68, I didn’t notice beforehand how I made several fatal mistakes that could compromise readers’ comprehension of the story, and I had to edit it for at least 3 times. And as the number of chapters grew, I ended up making mistakes regarding the details and plot.
And it would take a long time for me to land on a storyline that I would be confident in, enough for me to compose a fic with. I might recollect them and write about them as a sequel to this fic, but right now I can’t think of any plot that I would find satisfying. I had much more stories to include on my mind (most notably the relationship between Rael and Seira) but I had to delete them all from my outline for the sake of word count and constancy with the main topic of this fic. I made a lot of discoveries on what I lack as a writer throughout my journey with this fic.
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